Vygil and Mellia share a day of their adventures with a young boy called Tom. Tom finds himself a part of wonders he could only imagine before, but the consequences will be more than he ever thought possible.please let me know what you think. need some constructive criticism

Azin’s village of Defra Elves is far from perfect, with the unique magic of Defra bound to their emotions some mistakes are understandable. But as the target of one particularly evil Fire Defra Azin cannot help but feel the village has been too understanding of his actions. Given the option to end his life by Fang, a wolf seeking help of a Beast Defra, Azin must choose between family and justicePlease let me know what you think i'm trying to get some unbiased feedback.